Myself, Mint, Aun, and Tar.
2. What happened?
Tar and Aun spilled his popcorn and water all over each other.
3. When did the story happen?
On last Sunday night.
4. Where did the story happen?
It happened at Aun's house.
5. How did it happen?
When a ghost scene emerges, it made Tar and Aun were shocked. Then they spilled his popcorn and water all over each other.
6. How did the story end?
we laughed and clean up.
Horror movie become funny
Mint, Tar, Aun, and me, we are friends. Last Sunday night we went to the Aun's house because it was her birthday. We watched the movie together, then we decided to watch "Ladda Land", it's a horror movie. Tar was sitting in the middle between Mint and Aun and me sit beside Mint. This movie made we excited and shocked through the entire movie. Tar has held the popcorn in front of his face and Aun held the water too. When a ghost scene emerges, it made me and MInt laughed because Tar and Aun were shocked very much. Then they spilled his popcorn and water all over each other. After that, we laughed and clean up.
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This story is interesting and exciting.I give you 8 point.
A story is interesting content is exciting
I give you 8.5 poin
I think this paragraph it's very nine and more interesting;but I think your face is scary more than ghost in the movie hahahahaaaa!!!!!
I give you 8 point.
your writing and paragraph are very nice also i love the pictures. 10 points is yours.
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