Off-campus experience
There are many reasons why I think study off-campus has had many experiences. First, students have more freedom and independence. When you move off-campus, you can set your own boundaries and you'll have more responsibility. Because you can think anything of yourselves. Second, You have more space. You could get your own room if you want it, and you have your own kitchen and living room. You also have more personal space because you don't worry about the environment around. Finally, Summer housing/Less moving. When you live in a dorm or an on-campus apartment you have to move out at the end of each University year. With your own place, you can stay as long as you want as long as you are paying rent.
(concluding Sentence) For these reasons living off-campus is the best thing for to do something with yourselves and you can find a lot of experience
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This paragraph is good and easy to understand. I give you 7 points.
This paragraph is okay, but I think the meaning of freedom and independent is the same meaning. I give you 7 point
I like your paragraph because easy to understand and interested. I give you9 poins
your writing is great. you have god idea, but you should divided it to 3 paragraph. anyway that is not a big deal. i give you 9.5/10.
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