where is our motorcycle?
One Saturday afternoon, my friend and I went to the restaurant. We went by my friend's motorcycle. He usually parks it in front of the restaurant, but that day the park was full. So he must park at the back of the restaurant. When we finished eating, we went to the park in front of the restaurant. It had a motorcycle that looks like his motorcycle. Then he tried to use the key to unlock it, but it can't open. Until the real owner came to his motorcycle and asked us what are we doing on his motorcycle? We very shocked and excited. After that, my friend remembered that he parked at the back of the restaurant. We apologized to him and walk away and we laughed all the way.
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Your story is ok. I laughed with your story. I give you 8 points.
It's comical and excited when real owner came to his motorcycle
I give you 9 poin
It' s make me laugh. You wrote a good paragraph and easy to understand.
I give you 8 point.
your writing is great, but your paragraph should be better than this. i give you 9.5/10
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